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rick and morty babs uwu 
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:iconcheesythicdoritolegs:
Alright, let me start off by saying this. It's not really all that bad.

Colors look fine and solid, and your shading looks okay on the neck and behind the hair.


However, there definitely problems that I have with the piece.

First, some of the lines are off. It looks like you rushed the piece by overlapping some places. Especially on the right side of the girl's face and that part of the hair  near the neck, it looks kinda distracting. I personally think you should've use an entire outline of black on every part of the piece, since it looks weird with the switch of color.

Then, some of the anatomy is off, since the girl's arms doesn't look proportional and the peace sign that Morty is holding looks strange. (I could give tutorials on this if you need help on that.)

Finally, the background is kinda taking the attention away from the characters, since it's blending with their peachy skin. If you could have done with a different color background, I think it make the art piece better.

Overall, this is not a bad piece. There are some problems with some areas of it, but I think it can be fix.

(BTW, I forgot to mention that you didn't finish one of Morty's arm, since it doesn't look color in and there's still a little gray there.)
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beetale Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the critique!
if you could point me to some anatomy help i'd really appreciate it <3 
also sorry for the late response! i was in cool leg 
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:iconcheesythicdoritolegs:
Fffff I should be sorry for responding THIS late. Motivation is wearing me thin as of lately.

Life kills as all hell sometimes ;;


But, Morty's left arm looks bent like a noodle when it should look like this.

www.wikihow.com/images/thumb/5…

Then, the fingers for the peace looks crooked when it should be like this:

Hand tutorial by shingworks   -Hands Tutorial- by odduckoasis

Also, I have noticed that the girl's hands are fatter than Morty's and it kinda looks weird that the girl holding the phone like that.  Especially when the fingers should be going to the other side of the phone.
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beetale Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahhh okay!
i also have an explanation for the funny lineart too 

My intuos pen and touch tablet is dead. i'm getting a new tablet soon hopefully in the next 2 weeks
Its a ugee 1910b screen tablet so that should help me get my digital art to be more accurate to my trad art : ) 
Thank you for the advice, i'll be using it today for a reference
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LittleDeez-SP Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Super! (Even if it’s R&M)
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beetale Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you!! >u<
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